I wish I'd known we'd wind up letting go,
I would've saved myself one more heartbreak;
Why would you think I'd like the same mistake?
I told you I despise the dance with woe:
I'm nauseous still from all the to and fro;
My soul is sore: —I've put my heart at stake! —
I sense the losses squash it like a snake;
I wish our yesterdays would leave me so…
I wished, I wish, I'll wish, and wish again,
Yet oft I wake with sorrow still with me:
I'm sick and tired of my unanswered prayer!
It's overdue for me to break the chain: —
A captain lost, ‘n an old familiar sea! —
Alas, I don't think that I even care.
I wish our yesterdays would leave me so… I wished, I wish, I'll wish, and wish again, Yet oft I wake with sorrow still with me: ......letting go is a virtue. only the strong ones can do it...psyhologically. thanku for this message. it helps me. tony
Hello Danny, a well deserved Poem of the Day. I especially like the line, A captain lost, ‘n an old familiar sea! —, which seems to capture the mood of the poem.
Beautiful sonnet! thank you for sharing.a ten..
Lovely Sonnet, Beautiful thoughts and words. An excellent Sonnet as old, BUT one thing I want to make you clear: I can tell you that God listens to everyone´s prayer and He responds all prayers, whether you are rich or poor, BUT as you perhaps not know: in His time, not in your time when you expect that. Sure, He will answer your prayer, never await the result, but that will come soon. a 10 for the vote. Excellent Sonnet as olds.
Deep feelings of sadness expressed in clarity of thought and mind. Soulful with strong emotions. A work of art. Thanks for sharing Danny.
I wished, I wish, I'll wish, and wish again, Yet oft I wake with sorrow still with me: I'm sick and tired of my unanswered prayer! ....yeah letting you go but hold you with my breath of remembrance great 10+++
superb nexus of love- I wished, I wish, I'll wish, and wish again, nice 10++++
Thank you guys for all your comments and your ratings. I'm glad you liked it, and it's an honor to be featured. I hope you could relate to it.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Dear Danny, such a great sonnet poem of the day... congrats for being chosen... huge 10++++