Liliana EL.


Letting - Poem by Liliana EL.

Frozen
Mesmerized by this screen
In between all I need
Still stuck
Can't seem to move away
say no to desire

Instead we give way
Forever in torment
The storm doesn't pass
Our actions decide
our present and our future
Not our past

Break free
Fly free
Unleashed, unchained, and bound to achieve


Comments about Letting by Liliana EL.

  • Rookie - 94 Points Vlad Mutuleanu (10/29/2013 6:55:00 PM)

    Simple and powerful!
    This poem is one of your best, in my opinion. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, October 9, 2013

Poem Edited: Tuesday, October 29, 2013


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