Liberty To Stay Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Liberty To Stay

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Liberty to stay
Sunday,12th July 2020

how one proposes to lead?
and lead
in his or her way
he should have the liberty to stay

one has full freedom
to show the wisdom
in tackling life's problem
and solve them

life has a purpose
so choose
in your style
and file your existence

life may prove difficult
and cause you embarrassment and insult
it is temporary
but necessary too

life has no particular angle
it is a symbol of "struggle'"
but one must have a resolve
to solve in his or her manner

Hasmukh Mehta
Courtesy: Edward Kofi Louis

Liberty To Stay
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life has no particular angle it is a symbol of " struggle'" but one must have a resolve to solve in his or her manner Hasmukh Mehta Courtesy: Edward kofi Louis

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Edward Kofi Louis 12 July 2020

Existence! ! Muse of the land, Liberty to stay! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Date & Time: 7/13/2020 12: 46: 00 AM Remove this comment Poem: 58754146 - Liberty To Stay Member: Dr Dillip Swain Comment: A jumble of ungrammatical words doesn't make a poem. Don't ever call me swine again you killer of poetry. I don't carei f I leave this site anymore. It is rubbish with you at the top. Really! I'm a freelancer who survives as a top poet of India.

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Date & Time: 7/13/2020 3: 29: 00 AM Remove this comment Poem: 58754146 - Liberty To Stay Member: Richard Wlodarski Comment: Excellent poem. What is the connection to Edward Kofi Louis?

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Richard Wlodarski 13 July 2020

Excellent poem. What is the connection to Edward Kofi Louis?

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Dr Dillip Swain 13 July 2020

A jumble of ungrammatical words doesn't make a poem. Don't ever call me swine again you killer of poetry. I don't carei f I leave this site anymore. It is rubbish with you at the top. Really! I'm a freelancer who survives as a top poet of India.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 12 July 2020

" but one must have a resolve to solve in his or her manner.." This poem is very brilliantly penned with reference to the work of Edward Kofi Louis. Righteous moments should be evaluated. An amazing poem is shared.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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