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Bullets in a Mouth
Dressed in white cloth
Shielding the blame
Polishing a sweet name
Germs of him that is dark
Leaks from mouths to Escape harm
A brush whiles he paints
A beautiful picture
In a ugly frame
The flower sweetening
Heart's dirty rags
Like knives pierce hearts
Pouring a stream of joy
When uncovered sour lives
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June 06/2009
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Love doctor you are proving daily that you are getting matured everyday...well penned the truth.
The flower sweetening Heart's dirty rags Like knives pierce hearts Pouring a stream of joy.....................wonderful phrasing by words of truth, well penned,10++, thanks for sharing
i acxtually read this yesterday, but did not mind reading it again.you got my vote
certainly lies speak the truth....... how is it possible to write about lies? unless the truth in you sprouts.........
yes indeed! ! ! ! lies can turn beautiful queens to dreaded serpents... liked this one eyen you said it well! ! ! 10+ with love shan
A brush whiles he paints A beautiful picture In a ugly frame The flower sweetening Heart's dirty rags Like knives pierce hearts Pouring a stream of joy When uncovered sour lives....beautiful write dear... balanced thought. it is how we live.... read mine' I am disgrace and no separate ways
Righteous anger Heartfelt pain Lies when like Truth half dressed Strut about De-robing is not A crime - But As you say a joy! Emotions Beautifully potrayed, Pls read my 'Deception' when you have time. Not so fine as yours maybe, but, heartfelt still the same! Angel.
i like the pun on these words 'a beautiful picture in an ugly frame' good write anjali
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
GOOOOD! ! ! not a poem but a truth. God bless..