Life! Poem by Candice Key

Life!

Rating: 5.0


For every step you take, I will be there
Every time you look my way, I will be there to hold you
I just can't stop loving you,
You are my other half and I won't ever let you go
You take my breath away
You make me smile
This feeling I know will be here every morning when I see your face
So don't ever forget that you are mine to hold, to love, to cry with, to laugh at, to sing in the shower next too
You take me as I am and I don't every wanna take you for granted
You put both feet into my world and you let me into yours
Life is not perfect but you are perfect in my life

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mohammad Akmal Nazir 02 May 2011

Nice poem with plenty of depth. Beautifully conceived. Good vivid imagery. Great stuff. A perfect...10 Thanks for sharing..... Please read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2

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Lexus Box 02 May 2011

i love it you need to write more

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