Life-For The Brave Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Life-For The Brave

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Life-For the brave
Friday,28th August 2020

Take it for granted
you are not wanted here
if you are not able to compete
and get your deserved place

life is a live race
one has to face 
the stiff challenges
and ably manage 

it is like a soldier on the front
the enemy will not grant
a life if he thinks of humanity
he has to be killed or kill anybody who is enemy 

childhood, young age speak differently 
they emerge when face changes, apparently
here the race is for survival 
one has to emerge as a successful individual 

life is only for the brave
to dare and crave 
for the position it means him
he has to attain it either single-handedly or as a team 

Dr Jadia Hasmukh

Life-For The Brave
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sharad Bhatia 28 August 2020

Good morning sir, Yes, life for the brave Not for the coward The one who fought won The one who got scared lost Thankyou for sharing such a energetic poem

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Dr Pintu Mahakul 28 August 2020

Now-a-days there is huge competition. Starting from childhood to old age a man competes a lot to sustain. There is struggle for existence as we notice and science tells. In this poetic world also we see competition. Poets are rushing in a row. Life is wonderful and it is granted here. Absolutely we have to live in cheerful and satisfied mood.

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Prabir Gayen 29 August 2020

life is a live race one has to face the stiff challenges and ably manage

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Observant 29 August 2020

You would do well to learn from Dr Siddiek's poems. He is a properly qualified person and poet. A real doctorate not like yours from a fake Moroccan certificate. His English reflects his learning, unlike yours in uneducated sequences. You fool no one but yourself.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 29 August 2020

Poem: 59069660 - Life-For The Brave Member: Sharad Bhatia Comment: Good morning sir, Yes, life for the brave Not for the coward The one who fought won The one who got scared lost Thankyou for sharing such a energetic poem

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Dr Dillip K Swain 14 June 2022

childhood, young age speak differently they emerge when face changes, apparently....excellent! I love this poem sir....Top score!

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 31 August 2020

Malaya Kumar Jati Hasmukh Mehta yes sir we must be like a lion each to face the challenge of life... excellent sir your short poem is so inspiring and motivating.Hats of to your extempore creativity 1 Hide or report this Like · Reply · 4d

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 31 August 2020

Malaya Kumar Jati Malaya Kumar Jati Hats off to you dear honourable sir.pranam 1 Hide or report this Like · Reply · 4d

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 29 August 2020

Poem: 59069660 - Life-For The Brave Member: Kumarmani Mahakul Comment: You deserve the right place here like the lion acquires the right place as king. You are noble and nice poet. Your poems are very amazing. You have rightly observed. In this world there is competition to sustain. An amazing poem is shared.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 29 August 2020

You deserve the right place here like the lion acquires the right place as king. You are noble and nice poet. Your poems are very amazing. You have rightly observed. In this world there is competition to sustain. An amazing poem is shared.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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