Life Has No End Poem by PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE

Life Has No End

Rating: 4.6


The picture of my friend
Scents her breath, heaven's air
Colors my life, heaven's sky
Blue eyes
It means life has no end

(For M.C.)

(2008/9/18)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tanya Stanford 18 September 2008

Love the simplicity and the impact of the words. Very good

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Lynda Robson 18 September 2008

I sometimes re-read your poems as you put so much meaning into them, this one being no exception. We all like to believe that life has no end, well-written my friend, 10 Lynda xx

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Sarwar Chowdhury 18 September 2008

yea Life has no end just move here to there......excellent......10

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Anjali Sinha 18 September 2008

very true life has no end +10 as always regards anjali

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Koyel Mitra 18 September 2008

An excellent poem.Liked it.A 10.

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being in love may disillusion us....bt fact remains...life and evry otha thing cmz to an end....

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Vilma Xelin 30 September 2008

life is just a road way to happiness.... if we are happy we just get our goal....

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Roland Bastien 28 September 2008

This is a nice and good poem. You capture what is always hard to express in a such minimalist manner....

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Viola Grey 21 September 2008

what a beautiful thought to place into the air....lovely, sweet poem

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Tsira Goge 19 September 2008

It is a sweet song about eternal love and about boundless blue eyes, sing a nightingale, sing... It is pleasant to hear your songs... From me 10... Tsira

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