(3.6.1993 / MALAYSIA)

What do you think this poem is about?

life is family

like a bug on a wind shield,
like the sand on my toes,
you my family,
even when i want to be free,
you are still in there.

why wont you let go,
i dont need you,
i can stand on my own
fly away bug,
wash away sand.

but now i feel empty,
no one is beside me,
where did you go? ,
i need u,
i'm sorry.

my family is important
and so is yours,
family is life
and life is family.

Submitted: Wednesday, September 02, 2009


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  • Obinna Eruchie (9/4/2009 6:01:00 AM)

    He left his family because to him they were bugging him. Now he feels the need to return to them, because 'there is no place like home'.

    Interesting.

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  • JOSEPH POEWHIT (9/2/2009 8:47:00 AM)

    Family is the backbone of society.

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  • Indira Renganathan (9/2/2009 8:42:00 AM)

    Finally your repentance surrendered to family to say life is family...very good words

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