River of life flows calmly ‘mid plains.
Alluvium of grief and joy settle at the bottom.
An intense emptiness stretches upon surface.
Ripples of memory circle out gingerly to create a stir.
It crashes thunderously at the mouth of ocean.
The deep breast of ocean fragments it to disperse,
On the beach, in the air, under the sunshine.
A new rhythmic motion takes place beyond stars.
The agile Cosmic Energy fashions life
From pliable matter again and again.
My petty joy and grief and stretched out emptiness
Feels so small in this vast process
Yet enormously big to drown me in!
A new rhythmic motion takes place beyond stars. The agile Cosmic Energy fashions life From pliable matter again and again...Beautifully expressed!
A deep thought on life and the fantastic things that may happen to our sweetest memories and good deeds after our river met with the giant ocean. I love the thoughts expressed.
Thank you Hans Vr. appreciate your comment and reading the poem very much.
LIFE IS ONE LONG RIVER OF ROMANCE SAYS A POET BUT TELL ME WHY POETS AND poetesses don't sing 4 me nor do they read me NEITHER DO SIR YOU I wonder why I am not a raw eater under the blue sky just say WHY TELL ME MY FANS just WHY
Thank you poet poet for your poetic comment and complain. But I am sure many people including me have read your poems.
This poem shows great imagiary. Beautifully written Savita.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
life is flowing river small to great, bad and good everything is floating here and the river goes to ocean - this ocean greets everything so if we make greatly depth the outlook of life we'll accept everything ///beautiful poem
Thank you so much Mahtab Bangalee for your positive comment.