Life-Stark Reality Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Life-Stark Reality

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Life-Stark reality
Thursday,22nd October 2020

life is a reality
and destined by an almighty
nothing works magically
but efforts put by an individual and blessed divinely

there is a sign for every action
follow the divine rules
and enjoy life and its fruits
bad people suffer, and it suits the noble people

hard work pays in the long run
nothing is achieved by the use of a gun
peace is the only key
love is the only remedy

either you are up with success
or down with failure
there is nothing in between
We see the result

life has its own path
it may end with death
you can take a calm breath
if have a good faith

Dr Jadia Hasmukh

Life-Stark Reality
Thursday, October 22, 2020
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 26 October 2020

Poem: 59443157 - Life-Stark Reality Member: Deluke Muwanigwa Comment: True. Those who misuse the gun have gone round in circles.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 26 October 2020

Poem: 59443157 - Life-Stark Reality Member: Parameswaran Nair Damodaran Nair Comment: either you are up with success or down with failure there is nothing in between

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 26 October 2020

Poem: 59443157 - Life-Stark Reality Member: Varsha M Comment: Beautiful poetry sir. Congratulations for being chosen as POD. thank-you.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 26 October 2020

THIS IS YOUR MOST BEAUTIFUL POEMY DR MAY YOU GET THE NOBEL THAT ONLY ALMIGHTY CAN TELL STAY TUNED AND WELL PH LOVES YOU UR THE VERY BEST

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 26 October 2020

Poem: 59443157 - Life-Stark Reality Member: Me Poet Yeps Poet Comment: THIS IS YOUR MOST BEAUTIFUL POEMY DR MAY YOU GET THE NOBEL THAT ONLY ALMIGHTY CAN TELL STAY TUNED AND WELL PH LOVES YOU UR THE VERY BEST

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Sylvia Frances Chan 26 October 2021

Congratulations being chosen as The Member Poem Of The Day by Poem Hunter and Team.5 Stars full Peace is the keyword!

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Chinedu Dike 26 October 2021

Really a witty philosophical rendition set aside for deep reflective thought.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 27 October 2020

Beautiful poem Hasmukh ji! Loed these lines expressing the importance of peace and harmony in the world... hard work pays in the long run nothing is achieved by the use of a gun Giti Tyagi, Karnal, India, Oct 27,2020

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 27 October 2020

Poem: 59443157 - Life-Stark Reality Member: Mahtab Bangalee Comment: either you are up with success or down with failure there is nothing in between We see the result life has its own path it may end with death you can take a calm breath if have a good faith

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 27 October 2020

Poem: 59443157 - Life-Stark Reality Member: Mahtab Bangalee beautiful poem penned with great meaning of life; yes, life has own path; we can take calm breath even after death if life can find out its secret meaning on this earth; congrats Sir for being selected this poem as POD...5******

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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