Like A Butterfly Melting Poem by Thomas Case

Like A Butterfly Melting

Rating: 4.8


The night is torn apart;
fractured and shattered by
the memory of you.
Stars shake and die,
and I'm filled with
diesel loneliness,
soul sick, like
a butterfly melting.
Everywhere I go,
I smell pumpkin pie, lilacs,
and sexual energy.
The day will come when
I'll not think of you;
not write a single line about
you- not feel you in the
attic of my mind,
but until then,
the crows peck at my
heart, spring never comes;
ice forms on my brain,
and life inches along like
a filthy worm.

Like A Butterfly Melting
Saturday, November 28, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: heartbreak,love lost,pain,relationships
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anil Kumar Panda 29 November 2015

Can understand the pain you are going through. Nice poem.

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Roseann Shawiak 03 December 2015

Totally love the imagery in your poem, it adds depth to the pain of your loss, forms a picture in the mind of the reader. Really great poem, thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

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A B Faniki 26 September 2019

Lovely simply lovely. A poem lovely poem lace with sadness yet the images are wow. Great write

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My revisit to this poem is thoroughly enjoyable

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That feeling of memories gnawing at one's heart… vividly expressed.

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 11 November 2021

Painfully beautiful Bravo!

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Unnikrishnan E S 05 August 2021

A very painful write. How life hurts when a cherished relationship is broken off. "Life inches along like a filthy worm.." Expressions gnawing at your heart..

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 01 March 2020

A poignant write. It expresses in beautiful detail the pain that a person feels in a broken relationship. Superb imagery.

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Thomas Case

Thomas Case

Oxnard, California
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