on my hand is metal cylinder
where, when put together it
will compress enough energy
to freeze your yearlong food
am thinking about minds that
toil long hours to come up
with this beautiful piece
truly amazing work of art
here i am measuring run-outs
inspecting for scars, scoring
finding cause of breakdown
too much heat been generated
which led to failure, ending
our body works along this line
over work, lack of nutrients
led to fatigue, organ failing
take lots of rest, eat good food
we need coolant, water is good
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over work, lack of nutrients led to fatigue, organ failing take lots of rest, eat good food..... Beautiful expression putting across the idea of a human machine vis a vis a normal man made machine. Thanks, Manonton.