“Now that you are cured of the disease
You can gladly go home in peace”
Said the doc to Lil
But seeing the bill
She collapsed from which she never rose!
A standard joke I thought that turned into a beautiful limerick. Made me laugh heartily.
Playing with life, money rules their life, undercover and on oath they do business deals, nice one. God Bless. Keep writing such nice poems.
bill kills! she had a choice-die from disease or die from the bill. she has chosen. Nice limerick.
Hope they thought about dropping the prices after Lil's death. Thank You
how very strange. today i wrote wrote a short poem which ended in rose, using the same definition! also i recently read a poem (also short, by Kim Barney, Which Doctor?) in which he mentions the doctor's bill! is Lil lucky [doesn't have to pay bill now] or not? you be the judge! bri :)
Ha......ha.. ha! Do you mean to say death is preferable to paying the medical bill? ? ?
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Wonderful satire..................I liked it. To take a humour out of this situation is amazing and noteworthy.10 Starts....