To My Anonymous Lover Poem by Valsa George

To My Anonymous Lover

Rating: 4.9


Somewhere in a strange land
An unknown heart throbs for me
Etching an amorous graffiti
On the blank walls of my mind
Where ever I am, I feel a pair of eyes
Fondly surveying and scanning me,
Speaking to me in silence
And keeps me awake in the night
I feel it all, I hear it all
Filling me with a sweet ache!

When night birds croon in the woods
And their mates answer the serenade,
When the moon begins her somnambulistic walk
And light beams percolate through pine needles,
When a hundred eyes open in the blue heights
To watch over the sleeping Earth,
When the whistle of a train is heard far away
And its music wanes into a monotonous drone,
When the rooster makes his first clarion call
Breaking the serene silence of the night,
When glow worms float in darkness
Like cruise ships over the sea,
When night gales shake the slender coniferous trees
And wind whistles among their leaves,
When sailing clouds blind the stars
And the night turns into an ebony shade,
When the opening Jasmine secretly exults
In her own exotic scent,

Sitting in my dimly lighted room
I draft this message of love
Pouring all my warmth into it
Thus emptying my love laden heart
That blazes with the fire of love
And encode it in cryptic script
To be mailed to you, my love!

Oh, it might take much time
Better it be a whispered endearment
Sent through this perfumed night breeze
That shall carry it from this end to that end

So kindly leave your window open!



Wish you all Poem Hunter Members A HAPPY VALENTINE'S DAY! !

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
In keeping with the spirit of Valentine's Day, the poet's fancy soars to an imaginary lover!
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Me Poet Yeps Poet 18 March 2020

Oh, it might take much time Better it be a whispered endearment Sent through this perfumed night breeze That shall carry it from this end to that end So kindly leave your window open! YOUR LOVELIER POEM MAKES ME REQUEST THEE DO READ MINE SIMILAR ONE SOME ONE SOMEWHERE WAITS FOR ME

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Thabani Khumalo 15 September 2019

And upon each encounter of my magical sleep, I continue from the last dream that your lips touched my mouth... Valsa George... Unravel this majestic mystery to me that I may do so understand why I repeat in reading this piece as I do a really good song. I think I rely on this piece giving me peace in my sleep. Please keep up the good work and keep us simple poets sustained in your work.

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Anjandev Roy 03 October 2019

Lovely poem.wonderful to read.Thank u. anjandev roy.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 31 January 2020

All words in the poem lines, mesmerizing and cocerning love, all words so well captured in a loveliest way. An amazing poem about LOVE. Thank you for sharing this timeless Valentine poem, Valsa. A 10 Topscore and much much more.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 31 January 2020

error, must be (first line) concerning. Thank you.

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Sochukwu Ivye 08 December 2023

This poem eloquently expresses the romantic yearning and anticipation, painting a vivid picture of a love transcending distance and time. The imagery of night's enchantment and the heartfelt message convey a beautiful sense of connection and longing.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 22 November 2022

A great poem. It gives me a lot of pleasure to read wonderful poem again and again.

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Kevin Patrick 22 November 2022

Though its been several years since this poems been published it still has the enchantment and imagery that are sublime to the soul. words bewitched with beauty!

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Simone Harriman 15 August 2022

Your poems hold so much beauty and light the emotion in my heart. You are truly a great poetess. Thank you for your beautiful write.

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Suresh Kumar Ek 22 September 2020

somewhere in an unknown land a poetic heart throbs for you

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