Limerick- His Concern Poem by Valsa George

Limerick- His Concern

Rating: 5.0


A woman ran into the balcony
Husband ran behind yelling... "Stop, Honey
Why are you so dumb?
Kindly do not jump
Our car's right below, think of the money"!

Limerick- His Concern
Wednesday, February 27, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: limerick
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
10 syllables each in lines 1,2 and 5. Also 5 syllables each in lines 3 and 4
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kim Barney 08 March 2019

Ha! Thanks for the laugh! Reminds me of the old definition of mixed emotions: when a man watches his mother-in-law drive his new car over a cliff...

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Kumarmani Mahakul 03 March 2019

Thank you very much for clarifying the poem's theme. Now I understand this clearly. For damaging of car and losing money the husband is worried. I cannot stop smiling large. Ha..Ha.Ha...ha..ha..ha..This is truly fun giving Limerick.

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Valsa George 03 March 2019

Unfortunately he has given greater priority to his car than his wife! Thank you once again Kumaramani sir!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 02 March 2019

You have brilliantly penned this poem which expresses the materialistic life of extravagant life-style and this is very fun giving. This says that money does not give real happiness and does not remove stress. Husband motivates his wife to show car and money to have wealthy life but still wife plans to jump from the building. She should not jump and all should live happily. This is excellent Limerick...`10

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Muhammad Ali 29 December 2019

Yes, so she could delay her jump and argue on his meanness. Otherwise, life filled with humor. Nice poem

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Anjandev Roy 09 December 2019

Absolutely brilliant. Thank u, dear poetess. anjandev roy.

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M Asim Nehal 12 March 2019

Ha ha ha. so he is more worried about car and money.....10++++

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Susan Williams 11 March 2019

Part 2. Your sense of fun and gaiety just sparkles in this piece! ! There does not seem to be any form or tone or topic that you cannot do and do with expertise! ! 10+++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++

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Susan Williams 11 March 2019

PART ONE> hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaa. I am forever being amazed at you, dear friend! ! ! ! ! ! I have never liked limericks until I met yours. I really only like your limericks with a few- very few- exceptions from one other writer here on PH. I definitely enjoy yours more than his.

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Valsa George 12 March 2019

Susan, I don't know how much of enthusiasm you have instilled in me with this wonderful comment. I am so thankful to you! I try to observe the rules when I write a limerick and if possible bring some hilarity into it! Actually I am not that humorous by nature, but try to be humorous! However it needs a big heart to applaud someone like this and once more I express my gratitude!

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