Limerick Poem.75. On Love Poem by Valsa George
Limerick Poem.75. On Love
A boy n' girl in love saw face to face
Each longed to be in sweet embrace
In a week, they were wed
But now as good as dead,
Together they run the sack race.
Know, love at first sight is a drama
Where lovers are in a kind of coma
First it may seem sweet
And shall sound cute
But soon it ends in mental trauma
Love should spring from the heart
As a fountain that shall eject n' dart
Love is not lust
It is more a trust
And one should hold on to it tight!
This time, the supply of Limericks is substantial. Enjoyed all three thoroughly- first two for its humour and the third one for its serious message. Thanks, Valsa ji.
In first site of drama wheel love exists and without love universe does not exist. A very nice and thought provoking poem shared...10
Loveably goofy. It's a sack race in more ways than one. They each have at least one leg in the same sack. A lot of it happens in the sack., and in this race they try to arrive at the finish line at roughly the same time.
The circle of love, from courtship to after marriage presented so humourously! mind blowing piece. I am a fan of your limericks. thank you.
Love should spring from the heart As a fountain that shall eject n’ dart Love is not lust It is more a trust And one should hold on to it tight! Verily, true love springs from heart not from eyes.....10
As Kelly Kurt has Observed it is a wonderful blending of Limerick and Poem with such meaningful message.
Poets are so full of knowledge, Those like you do also teach, And give us all real courage. Right on, On love, Valsa!
You have taken limericks a step further to deliver a beautiful message that love is trust.
Know, love at first sight is a drama Where lovers are in a kind of coma hahahaha Mam Good one...enjoyed
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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5/10/2024 11:04:25 PM # 1.0.0.1119
A wonderful blending of poem and limerick, with a precise and insightful view on love (and lust)