Ellias Anderson C.A ( Known as captain A)

Rookie - 264 Points (Iran, Islamic republic of)

Limitations In Every Aspects - Poem by Ellias Anderson C.A ( Known as captain A)

There was a nice party in heaven, all the angels were there
The sky was color full, angels danced in the air
Of the hall of paradise, a glorious light,

Glowing and burning, ' a frighten' bright
The light was a sign of dangerous action,

It came from hell, from devil faction
The light contains a message for the heaven people

That message was longer than an old steeple
The message was read, and it was something strange from evil,

Then the values of some angels was lower than a weevil
Satan said in his message: dance and bee cool

But don't forget the lord and don't bee fool
Some of us think laughing is just a sign of happiness

We don't know that also it can be a sign of snappiness
Being happy, laughing, dancing is not bad

The people would be happy and also glad
But in the middle of being happy and laughing and in the party

Just don't be so prideful and don't be so arty
Everything has a limit and a red line

In every aspect of life, in laughing, dancing and drinking wine!


Comments about Limitations In Every Aspects by Ellias Anderson C.A ( Known as captain A)

  • Veteran Poet - 1,269 Points Unwritten Soul (7/7/2012 11:53:00 AM)

    One of good aspect in your poem is, you always put some good advice and value in every poem...like this one you tell to behave moderate i, it really a nice advice...Laughing without control could be someday a struggle to meet sad in the future, dancing and partying is nothing when we really meet a real value of life...the wise in you alive well in this write to remind all young people...and whatever in future....without laughing and partying, happiness is the most important thing to looking for...but it not by these ways, a happy soul can easily comes when we do a smallest good thing...as heart knows the value and the value is the key for a smile and to be happy_Unwritten Soul (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 352 Points Captain Cur (7/7/2012 6:50:00 AM)

    Great job! Enjoyed the words and the tempo of the poem.
    Delivering your message is very important and you did it excellently. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 43,993 Points Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr (7/7/2012 2:02:00 AM)

    Well Done....Couplet stanzaic structure works well here...~FjR~ (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, July 7, 2012

Poem Edited: Saturday, July 7, 2012


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