Live Presence Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Live Presence

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Live presence

I look back and miss you
You were really true
You reared me like real human
I felt for everybody’s pain

I could not take you along
As I was posted long back
It was duty on frontier
That was called border

You were sick for sometimes
But never complained at any time
You confided me about your last wish
Yu wanted life to be finished soon

I was afraid
That she might be laid
In my absence
I shall always miss her live presence

Live Presence
Wednesday, November 18, 2015
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Anita Sharma 18 November 2015

poet hasmukh amathalal #174 on top 500 poets Poet's Page Poems Quotes Comments Stats E-Books Biography Send Message Share on Facebook Share on Twitter Poems by hasmukh amathalal: 5418 / 11196 « prev. poem next poem » Live Presence - Poem by hasmukh amathalal Live presence I look back and miss you You were really true You reared me like real human I felt for everybody’s pain I could not take you along As I was posted long back It was duty on frontier That was called border, , , , , , , , , , , such excellent write.loved and liked

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 18 November 2015

Ying Ying Thanks my dear Hasmukh Mehta your message make me cry... Unlike · Reply · 1 ·

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Shakil Ahmed 18 November 2015

I shall always miss her live presence beautiful expressions, well penned, thanks for sharing.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 18 November 2015

I was afraid That she might be laid In my absence I shall always miss her live presence

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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