Loaves And Fishes Poem by Tan Pratonix

Loaves And Fishes

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‘Are you so anxious for your life? ' The problem of hunger.
‘What shall you eat? ' Now listen and ponder.
Remember He took five loaves in His hands
And looking up to heaven, gave thanks,
And broke and kept on giving,

And in His hands, in the very act of breaking,
The bread multiplied
And they all ate and were satisfied.

Each of the twelve picked up a small basket
To take home, a divine token,
Of fish fragments and bread broken.

Another time He took a few small fish and seven
Loaves, and looking up to heaven,
Blessed, and kept breaking;
And the disciples taking
The food to the multitude
Wondered how it multiplied;
And again they all ate and were satisfied.

From each loaf a large basket (a total of seven) ,
Speaking of the overflowing abundance of heaven.

When questioned about the miracles, they replied
Childishly, and He dissatisfied
Said, ‘Do you not yet understand? '

This is a divine illustration of supply and demand:
Twelve small baskets for each disciple's need;
And from seven loaves, the baskets broad
Display the bounteous provision of God.

Monday, November 21, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: christ
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Pamela Sinicrope 24 February 2017

This is well done. I love the way you tell the story and weave in a modern economics concept to explain God. I enjoyed this.

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Paul Warren 30 November 2016

Quality poem in a religious 10

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Daniel Brick 26 November 2016

I'll take your word on this, that the story of this miracle shows THE BOUNTEOUS PROVISION OF GOD. I prefer the immediacy of FAITH'S TOUCH, FAITH'S WONDER. If a poem gives time and space to think about a miracle, I lose faith because if the arbitrary nature of miracles. But that shouldn't in any way deter your writing. There are many believers who will be moved by your carefully composed and heart-felt by your poetic update of the biblical story. You are using your poetic gifts to renew the sacred story for believers.

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