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Lonely We

Lonely you, lonely I,
Lonely together; here we lie.
Lonely me, lonely you,
Lonely in love, O! what to do?

Lonely us, lonely we,
Lonely alike, just you and me:
Lonely allies;
Life mundane makes
Lonely souls to cry in pain.

At least this mirror helps my plea -
Some lonely cheer in what I see -
To share my pain to some degree:
Another lonely I with me.


Copyright © Mark R Slaughter 2009

Submitted: Monday, February 23, 2009
Edited: Tuesday, May 24, 2011


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  • Diane Hine (4/13/2012 7:19:00 PM)

    Quite profound comment on the human condition.

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  • Kerry green evil becomes her (2/5/2010 4:50:00 PM)

    i like your poem it is great a lot of meaning

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  • Hannah Benson (4/18/2009 3:01:00 PM)

    you have edited this since last i read it i like though :)

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  • Ency Bearis (4/17/2009 8:54:00 AM)

    I can see how wonderful this poem is..that's why it was plagiarize by that certain boy named Chris Sandoval...nice to read and rhymes..good write...10

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