Longing For Freedom Poem by Ishita Mehta

Longing For Freedom



Sitting alone in the dark,
Longing to see a streak of light
Waiting to be freed
To return home

For the morning of my life is finally to arrive
Waiting in patience
But how much longer can I survive?
Trapped within 4 walls
Hoping that I shall soon revive.

The outside world would seem so unfamiliar now
A place where I can be as free as a bird
A one is able to fulfill his desires
Where the sound of love is always heard

Once again my years long for sweet music
My eyes for beautiful sights
Waiting to be freed
To return home
For the morning of my life to finally arrive.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Obinna Eruchie 16 July 2009

Longing to be free to taste the outside world. Good.

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Afzal Shauq 07 July 2009

The outside world would seem so unfamiliar now A place where I can be as free as a bird A one is able to fulfill his desires Where the sound of love is always heard wow you seem more then poet and this very much romantic poetic poem shows...you are fantsizing the life and world..well done..poem is rich and very much metaphor type..having visuaized effects..one can feel it.. its truly a good and inspiring poem dear friend...10+++++++++++

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