Look Deeper Poem by Young Church Poetry

Look Deeper

Rating: 4.8


Resembles
Beautiful Ocean
But inside sharks are
Hungry to ruin.
Looks amazing
But fatal inside.
Resembles
Wonderful sun,
But come closer and
Burn to ashes.
Supports life
But destructive too.
Resembles
Delightful sky,
But there is no life for
Human beings.
Attractive
But without a room.
Might look like an angel
But it's bitter.
Might seem like heaven
But it's mercury.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
***The Book Of End Of Times
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 09 April 2013

i applaud your skill of perception. a deep poem

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 19 October 2012

Except for the last two lines, this poem is very realistic and full of intelligence!

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Hazel Durham 13 October 2012

A original poem everything has its good and bad points. Great write!

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Lyn Paul 13 October 2012

Yes tread lightly. Beautifully written Young Church

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Persian Khushi 13 October 2012

awesome writing! en joyed reading.

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