Looking Out Poem by Alafe Ramat

Looking Out

Rating: 4.7


I was looking out, but was gazing inward, towards a life of memories, before the birth of a new story, . , ................ I was looking out, but i was freaking out, holding onto my own whispers as it crows faintly before the liberty of this boldest steer, .............. I was looking out, at the shadow casted upon the world, cunningly holding out what rail? ......... For each way says a tale before the price of a new dowry, .........I was looking out, from the saddle of a horse, but was riding from the heart of one, here, ..before i ran free, i tried reaching deep inside that painting, for there i still wonder.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Gajanan Mishra 22 February 2013

gazing inward. thanks. I like it. I invite you to read my poems and comment.

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Jazib Kamalvi 01 March 2020

Such a nice poem, Alafe. Read my poem, Love and L u s t. Thanks.

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Nasarudheen Parameswaran 29 April 2017

The juxtaposing of ideas is well done.beautiful poem

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Khairul Ahsan 11 August 2013

Poetic expression of inner feelings!

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Dave Walker 23 February 2013

A great poem, really well put together. Great work.

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Unwritten Soul 23 February 2013

Make your castle by the dream, paint the edges with reality you may feel it so real it seem Awake you in true but still in fantasy ..Nice work Alafe, but i prefer you do it line by line_Soul

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