Lora In The Garden Of Eden [ Inspired By Lora Colon's "Red Ink", On P H; Love/Lust/Loneliness; Very Short; Creation; Ok!S E X! ! ] Poem by Bri Edwards

Lora In The Garden Of Eden [ Inspired By Lora Colon's "Red Ink", On P H; Love/Lust/Loneliness; Very Short; Creation; Ok!S E X! ! ]

Rating: 5.0


If Eden's Adam's BIG fig leaf you had upturned,
I think, your advances, he'd not have spurned.

Perhaps horny Adam needn't have lost any rib,
as, not Eve, but Lora he'd have taken to his crib**.


(December the 14th ……………2017)

** Thieves' slang for "dwelling house" dates to at least 1812.

Thursday, December 14, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: creation,humorous,loneliness,lust,sexuality
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Lora ia a perpetual writer (in "red ink")of love, loneliness, and regret, but she 'does it'............SO WELL! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

BRI :)
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Loke Kok Yee 12 January 2018

How could you know that she does it well? From reading her poems, will it tell? Or had she put you under her spell? Causing your head and elsewhere to swell Thanks Bri

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Fiadh Fida 18 December 2017

he'd not have spurned, well humorous, liked,

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Akhtar Jawad 15 December 2017

So you mean heart of a woman is a barred cot, but Bri is a child with long legs. Enjoyed your poem.

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