Losing your virginity
Is likely to be sh**
It’s not all it’s cracked up to be
Let’s be honest, is it?
So do yourself a favour
Don’t build your hopes up high
Too many people aren’t so clever
Then go home and cry
Sure you want to do your best
With Miss or Mr Right
But why not just get it off your chest
When you know it will be sh**e?
Sex is like a wine or scotch
A cigar or a cheese
You have to have it quite a lot
Before it starts to please
THIS POEM IS STRAIGHT TO THE POINT IT SHOWS THE TRUE MEANING BEHIND THE KIND OF SEX BEING EXPLOITED IN THE MEDIA TODAY. THIS POEM SHOWS OTHER YOUTHS THAT SEX ISNT WHAT PEOPLE THINK IT IS, IT'S SO MUCH MORE.
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I'm glad you enjoyed it, Ruth. I hope that people laugh when they read this poem, as it is quite silly. Nonetheless, I stand by the message: people shouldn't get upset if their first time is a bit of a disappointment.
I hate to be the one to be so honest, but this is awful. It is sophomoric, and trite.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Bravo. I like the message, and the humour that lies within the poem. I think diversity is so important in a poem. I'ts what makes comedy writers different. I enjoyed that. Best Steve