Zach McAuliffe

Rookie (Cincinnati Ohio)

Loss


Gone is the wind,
When gone is the sun.
When the sun is gone,
What is left?

Submitted: Sunday, October 26, 2008
Edited: Tuesday, October 28, 2008
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  • Rookie - 62 Points Kesav Easwaran (11/1/2008 9:52:00 PM)

    there won't be any 'wind' in either me or you! good intelligent write...beautifully philosophic in just four short lines...10 (Report) Reply

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