Lost Poem by Marilyn Shepperson

Lost

Rating: 5.0


I walked along the path, from the hut
Into the large, wild forest
It was a lovely afternoon
As I wandered this way and that
Until I turned around from a patch of berry bushes
To realise to my horror, I was totally lost
Panic set in, as I looked up
To see rain clouds gathering overhead
At any moent I was going to get wet
It's perhaps not surprizing, how when frightened
The mind refuses to think logically
So it is that I raced up every track
Unable to remember how to get back
But then I heard a voice, clear as anything
Say, Go along here. This is the way to the entrance
By now heavy raindrops were beginning to fall
As I looked around for the voice
Yet there was no-one there at all
Still I took its advice and began to run
Along that winding, twisting track
Til at last, I burst out from the trees
It was the entrance and there ahead
Was shelter for me until the rain had passed.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Susan Williams 14 September 2018

Lost- -the worst feeling to have especially in a dark and twisted wood

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 28 September 2006

Mystical Write.I like this a lot, Marilyn.Again your strong command IN utelizing vivid imageryhas prevailed....Afine Penning'FJR

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Scarlett Treat 28 September 2006

You are really doing some 'other world' works right now, and they truly give one a shiver or a pause to wonder about a voice unseen. Dark forrest have a way of doing that, and graveyards as well. These, however, are very well done!

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