Lost Dreams Poem by Jessica Elizondo

Lost Dreams

Rating: 5.0


i need a dream catcher to hold
my lost dreams that wont be told
two hands just can't fold
these lost visions from my soul.

once was beautiful,
now is lost.
I let them go and
and paid the cost.

gone on tha soft breez
only to be reborn
on the wings of bumble beez.
heaven keep them please.

Take them
and throw them away
I'm moving on
in a better way.

I'm following new dreams
ones I'm not letting go,
I'm not giving up.
so let the wind blow.

Lord, Give me strenght
And let my dreams come true.
When I'm struggling
Let me look up to you.


Made by me. And by ~Painted Warrior~ hope you like it.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Jess, as i read this tears came to my eyes, , cause i realy enjoyed working on it with you.you finished it with grase and beauty.

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Serenity Prayer 09 July 2008

good job ya'll. nice work. excellent. =)

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Rema Prasanna 08 July 2008

I'm following new dreams ones I'm not letting go, I'm not giving up. so let the wind blow. Lord, Give me strenght And let my dreams come true. When I'm strugglingLet me look up to you... Jessica i like these lines...such a beautiful thought and keep writing..your dreams will come true in a colourful way. Rema

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Linda Weischedel 08 July 2008

GREAT JOB Jessica! ! ! ! I enjoyed reading this.

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