ahmed khaled


/ Lost In Words /


the sea was dust,
the dust was sea,
and both were sky
no one there
no one here
no one around
only the pens,
and this poet
lost in words

Submitted: Sunday, September 25, 2011
Edited: Thursday, January 12, 2012

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  • Rookie Crisa Earley (2/2/2012 9:57:00 AM)

    I'm not quit sure but I really enjoyed this poem. It's beautiful, and has a certain innocence about it. It gives you a Brie into the poets solitude while he's writting. Very good! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Deep Mukherjee (2/1/2012 5:42:00 AM)

    yes; this is poetry and i am inspired; someday when i will be able enough; i will follow your footsteps! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Auro Bhattacharya (1/30/2012 8:30:00 PM)

    Yes this one is one of the best works of you dear. Very imagery and deep meaning. Fantastic and you deserve the best appreciation. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Fiona Eris Strand (1/27/2012 5:47:00 PM)

    Thank you for inviting me to read this. I very much enjoy short and concise abstractions of this kind. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Lawrence H (1/11/2012 5:10:00 PM)

    Short wordings and sweet poem with a rhyme..I gave a rating of 6/10...maybe you inser more paragraphs to make 12 stanza to form a sonnet. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 5 Points Rigzin Namgyal (1/3/2012 12:04:00 PM)

    ..the sea was dust..
    ..the dust was sea..and both were sky..
    ..these words made a chill run through my body..
    ..words were few..but very very powerful.. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 660 Points Unwritten Soul (12/31/2011 6:29:00 AM)

    For poet, everything just inside the pen..you can create illusion in mind just by word..your pen is a wand if you are wizard hahahaha....but also your pen is like crown for a King...
    You never lost in word, if you as a poet sew the nice words for heart to wear..Love in poetry is exist as poet use pen to write...Hmm maybe use computer in today's life hahaha Joking_Unwritten Soul (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 1,199 Points Hans Vr (12/30/2011 7:57:00 PM)

    All alone with your pen and the magic of sea, dust and sky.
    Many times words fall short to describe such magical moments of amazing beauty. Wonderful observaion, masterfully penned. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Sarah Hardin (12/30/2011 5:04:00 PM)

    A lovely poem, though short of words it is pact with meaning. Thank you for sharing. (Report) Reply

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