ahmed khaled

the loving see the red
the beloved see the green
and the poetry master
see them both.......
what an outstanding piece of writing! ! ! ! ! ! !

Wonderful piece of art, I enjoyed it

You have written a very lovely poem keep it up man.

Good poem.
Keep penning :)

Black and white. Good and evil. Why must there be war before peace? A great poem, my friend. Poets can still see the beauty and remind others who might have lost all hope. You've succeed, dear poet.

Fight for sun after snow fall at midnight...Artistry dwell in your poetry then grow and grow to be bigger in many lines, the meaning..
as you help many people there when
walking on streets of papers by your ink feet
raising all deleted words in your metaphor beauty
hidden lines but exist in understanding
and fallen faces yet to rise
I like this part: for me i look into this vision-
in drops: half red, half green: Collision of two pigments that make flowers(red) and leaves(green) come one as natural beauty! ! !
the loving see the red: how brave and passionate it is, strong feeling
the beloved see the green....: how peaceful it was

ur really a great poet, dear friend.........

I sincerly feel sorry for u. May peace surround the walls of ur country. Nice poem

Great poem friend, we wish and pray that your people get the freedom they deserve...and your voice to fight for freedom of your people, realy touches me...thanks for sharing.

This is very good. I enjoy your work immensely friend.