Holly Jamestone

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Lost Love


Nothing is more painful than lost love
It blindsides you and weeps into your cells as
Its takes you to an involuntary place
And sweeps pieces of you into a corner

It melts your mind into blobs of jelly
And then spoons it onto a stale piece of bread
Which is later forgotten on a plate
And tossed into the trash

Submitted: Monday, July 29, 2013
Edited: Tuesday, July 30, 2013

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[5-6-2013]
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  • Veteran Poet - 4,016 Points Khairul Ahsan (8/11/2013 1:32:00 AM)

    An amazing piece of poetry, with an attractive title. The first line is the summary and the last line, the conclusion. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 781 Points Thomas A Robinson (7/29/2013 9:28:00 PM)

    lost love is a necklace we wear around our neck, our albatross.
    We shot the arrow and take it's life
    now we must pay in sacrifice
    In coins of two pains, six pentance
    and faded paper dreams of poetry. (Report) Reply

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