Lost Love Poem by Holly Jamestone

Lost Love

Rating: 5.0


Nothing is more painful than lost love
It blindsides you and weeps into your cells as
Its takes you to an involuntary place
And sweeps pieces of you into a corner

It melts your mind into blobs of jelly
And then spoons it onto a stale piece of bread
Which is later forgotten on a plate
And tossed into the trash

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
[5-6-2013]
©2013 All Rights Reserved
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Khairul Ahsan 11 August 2013

A special word of appreciation for the priceless observation of Thomas A Robinson.

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Khairul Ahsan 11 August 2013

An amazing piece of poetry, with an attractive title. The first line is the summary and the last line, the conclusion.

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Holly Jamestone

Holly Jamestone

Denver, CO U.S.A.
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