Love Poem by VIPINS PUTHOORAN

Love

Rating: 4.7


Love means,
God's heart beats
In a divine rhythm
On your bosom.
Where soul lingers on slowly
On a celestial meadow
Of sacred passion
With our luminous eyes
Where a zenithal moist breeze
Caresses your hair gently.
And your lips whisper softly
To sing the lullaby
of love rhythmically,
That embraces your ears
When you are in silence!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 30 October 2011

good visualization. soul inger - soul lingers that embrace - that embraces

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Dina Acuna 31 October 2011

Nice poem. good write! !

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Cosmic Dreamer 31 October 2011

Love can always be magic, but magic is often an illusion... Very nice poem...

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Harindhar Reddy 31 October 2011

Dear fellow poet I have no words to express on your love rhyme as I am dumbstruck by the deep meaning it carries. Furthermore, I like these poetic lines... 'And your soul lingers on slowly On a celestial meadow Of sacred passion With your luminous eyes' Love is always an ethereal inspiration to you, me, one and everyone. You expressed your love in poetic lines in stylish way. By heart and soul I feel you are have potential to become one the great 21 century poets on romanticism. Decent work with noble passion. Bonvoyage in your poetic journey boss! Rating 10++++++++

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Nasarudheen Parameswaran 01 November 2011

It gives me metaphysical sensation.

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Swetha V 31 December 2011

a very good write. i like it

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Shahana mahazin 27 November 2011

loved it....exhausted on love....with some lines.

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Cassie Anderson 08 November 2011

I really like the beauty of this poem! ! ! Amazingly put! !

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Sonali Sings 06 November 2011

Love makes the world go...and here it has made the poem go at many new places, viz, to hear the heart beat of the Almighty, compared to a sacred passion travelling in space, then after touching lips, hair, eyes finally embraced the ears of the beloved in the form of a rhythmical lullaby which is heard only in silence. A lovely poem indeed! ! !

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Ramesh Rai 06 November 2011

Love means, God's heart beats in my poem i have stated love is also the blessing of god. best

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