Love awakens any age
Fifties thirties teen
Grows to strength with steady rage
Ripe emotions sown!
Lust awakens any time
Midnight noon or morn
Goes to sleep that ready time
Mad water flown!
heheh 'mad water flown' that could be taken a few ways...love the comparison of age with stages of the day...i actually did the exact same thing in my poem entitled 'a life cycle' check it out if you haven't....great poem
the one is timeless and the other timebound, , , , good comparison and a nice poem, ,
This poem is very well penned, and clearly eloquent. Two different stanzas to bind Love and Lust together and show their differences and links. I like the kind of timeless or 'lifetime through' association you give to love compared to Lust melted with dayly moments. Very nice.
A concise and creative poem written in verse with rhythmic splendour, focused and factual. A witty composition. Thanks for sharing.
Subtle difference of ‘AGE’ and ‘TIME’…indeed very Original…so common before our eyes but not in words…yeah…Poet’s feeling can delve and bring out the occult truth…thanks Sir.. 10 {heartfelt] Ms. Nivedita UK
very cute observation lust: that panther lives within doesnot sleep at all..............
What ever be the subject, the way u express it is exquisitte and amusing.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
as love needs no time and space when blind to all reasons yet organic, superb write by the imagery of love when uniquely melds by the lucid thought,10+, thanks for sharing