Love And Marriage - Triple Tetractys Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Love And Marriage - Triple Tetractys

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clouds
shower's
drops falling
wet in desires
of burning flames ignited by the lust
body satisfied, relived from burden
soul purified
eyes twinkle
heart calm
love
sooth
the two
and ties them
together in
pure, divine and unblemished relation

M. Asim Nehal
Monday, July 11, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: love and friendship,marriage
poem poems lust
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POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
The rules are little bit tough, Triple Tetractys must ahve following syllable for each lines: 1,2,3,4,10, 10,4,3,2,1, 1,2,3,4, and 10. syllable
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kelly Kurt 11 July 2016

For having to follow such strict guidelines, the poem turned out wonderful.

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Edward Kofi Louis 12 July 2016

Wet in desires! ! Thanks for sharing this lovely poem with us.

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T Rajan Evol 12 July 2016

Great poem within limitation.....Love before marriage in physical form is sin and marriage purifies the relations.

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Darren Jkoeryo 28 December 2018

Wonderful write LOVE and Marriage

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Darren Jkoeryo 10 January 2019

Intelligent poem.........................

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Suzon Albert 31 December 2018

Superb analysis on love n marriage. Every word spraks individually.

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T Rajan Evol 29 December 2018

Pure divine and unblemish. What a great description of love n marriage.

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S H 28 December 2018

Ok this is better than the previous one.

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S H 28 December 2018

Good one this is difficult to write.

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