Love Can Change Poem by louis rams

Love Can Change



I had felt love taking control of my heart body and soul
Making me feel like I was walking on air without worries
Without cares.
Then it changed and it felt like a thunderstorm racing thru my heart
Pulling, jerking it and tearing it apart.
After the show and everyone has gone home and you're left all alone
That is when the heartaches begin and the tears start to flow
From the pains that you know.
Love can be so beautiful and it can also hurt when it's
Kicked and thrown in the dirt.
Yet I know there is someone out there wo really does care
For they are feeling the same thing too and feel what
My heart is going thru.
Yes!love can change again and again - then become
Like a concrete wall which will take a lot for it to fall.
DON'T GIVE UP ON LOVE
© L. RAMS 080119

Thursday, August 1, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Practicing Poetess 26 August 2019

This, in my opinion, is one of the best poems you have ever written! Powerful descriptions accurately present the many aspects of love, which indeed can and does change. You really nailed it, Louis- - truly a great poem. I hope to see more of these! :)

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Julia Luber 01 August 2019

Ultimately, a strong perception of love being strong like a concrete wall- after much tumult and dramatic loneliness. Great poem.

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