Darling oh Darling
Embraces this writing
Letter of better
Cannon of greater
Bombarding you withiest
Splinters of kisses
Dances of jittery
Camped with animosity
No love triumphs
But the hearts prime
Sings to my ears
Drowns me with tears
Darling
What a joke when I drink
I taste your lemon touch
What a freak when I eat
I crunch your blueberry eyes
What a nag when I sleep
I dream of your strawberry smiles
Fruit juices are everywhere
You are my fruits
Evidence just wouldn’t be enough
Our terrains of love are ploughed
Darling
The phantom of Juliet haunting
Romeo’s gravely posture
Unease the mystery within
The soils and gravel moisturized
With tears of silhouette paradise
Don’t tell me of your parent’s anguish
Should we lavishly skirmish?
Knowing something is amiss
Letting our desires rest in peace
Freaking nights full of horror’s fright
Could not change our plights
Darling
Elope with me to heaven
Earth unsafe the heat would get us burnt
The rising mercury pauses
Our hearts abetting losses
Love trembles to death
The Angels wait
Clock is ticking to our senses
Hinting the peculiar madness
Another option is tragedy
What is the pedigree?
To marry you out of wedlock and flee
Is like dead but not death
beautifully translated...your words flow eloquently and soften the heart
it gets extremely captivating 'the phantom..' onwards... a 10! !
a definate 10...i love the end, the 'Elope' verses....amazing. astounding metaphors. the whole poem quite literally touches the heart. love it!
waittt, , i hve a corrction on ths...its not for every generations..coz others r using sms to send ths kisses, , , ooowwww whatta social world..
a love letter for all generations? maybe, , , its for our generations.... but when we gage ths as poem, ths s excellent hon from u..am a late comer here so here i am, , , hehehhe came late... a very beautiful piece, , , my gosh, i dont want to put flowering wrds on ths, , u mght think i lied.. ths s EXCELLENT...SUPERB..HONORED..no one hits u hon, believe me..
pleasant love letter for a loved one...hmmm....cute... 'What a nag when I sleep I dream of your strawberry smiles '....best lines...
To be honest I think that you have best poems but this one is good too bye have a good night
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
your love poems are excelling one another, Sulaiman...good write...10