Love Lost Hearts
By Rema Prasanna
Love lost hearts....
finalized one deal
on a legal bond sheet
one escape
an effortless one
lost love dissolved
belongings divided
on ended deals
fights not a base
lifeless items don’t react
but the reactive children
their tears, one task to wipe
their souls strained
and their wings sliced
love, failed and lost on egos
a constructive belief in self expressed in flowery words....good poem
Their souls strained and their wings sliced....How can a couple do to their own children..very touching10 and more stars Thank you
i got to know that signing any contract would meant a lot, forever.........a lifetime to accept what is beyond the pages of the paper... you woke me up, in your poem... a 10 point.....good, thank you
Well write... The Grief and sufferings is natural companions for love. Tsira
love was excitement when it struck me first and became a fever by spring time by autumn it was an incurable malady by winter i was decapitated by it
You said it true, how easy it is to suddenly bond and then break that bond these days. Sad story of the times, but the kids... that is surely the saddest part! Well expressed!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
exactly, rema...love has no place where ego reigns... good theme...good attempt