Leila Kay

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Love making Love


Fingers mesmerizing cool and soft against skin
Tongues softly seeking whipping tasting lingering
Arms clutching holding wrapping enfolding yearning
Love making Love

Bodies yours to mine moulding wanting
Caressing touching electrifying
Silken subtle gentle
Wild and wonderful
Feathered touch
Crushed rose petals

Breaths heavy hot hard
Molten Volcanic
Fiery delight

Essence of love
Passion
Unforgettable irrisistable unimaginable

Lavender Chamomile Jasmine
Sweet sultry
Amazingly beautiful

Fantasy Dream Reality
Love making Love

Submitted: Friday, March 30, 2007
Edited: Wednesday, February 09, 2011

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  • Rookie - 0 Points Ashok Kumar (7/21/2008 9:01:00 PM)

    Nice. It looks like imagination has given way experience. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 123 Points marvin brato (10/9/2007 4:31:00 AM)

    Love making love....a romantic romance creating lovingly love a reality so real! Great write, loved it. Top mark (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Duncan Wyllie (5/3/2007 12:56:00 PM)

    Hot under the collar here Leila, you express the closeness so well here, sensual and beautifully done
    Love duncan x (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Duncan Wyllie (5/3/2007 12:56:00 PM)

    Hot under the collar here Leila, you express the closeness so well here, sensual and beautifully done
    Love duncan x (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Andrew mark Wilkinson (4/29/2007 8:41:00 AM)

    Very passionate indeed Leila, what a picture you paint too... andy x (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Nyrical Poet (4/19/2007 5:27:00 PM)

    Leila, this is such a passionate and moving piece of work! ! I will have to agree with you, I totally love making love! ! ! This is a definite 10 in my book! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 3 Points Tranquil Ocean (4/13/2007 2:38:00 AM)

    Written with a lot of sensuality and elegance
    Love...TO (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Hazem Al Jaber (3/31/2007 11:44:00 AM)

    wow..
    love making love...
    that`s so true, , and no one can feel this lovely and warm feelings only whom are in love..
    you are in love leila.. i swear i can feel this within your great words, which sure came out through your soul and heart..
    great write..
    so stunning and warm..
    yours
    hazem (Report) Reply

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