Love me, if you can!
Love the hell, I have created!
Love my misfortunes!
Love the ugly face of hatred...
That I used to dream
All my afternoons
Love the poisonous jealousy...
With which in our way
Rather to die once, we all
Dying several times a day!
Love my greedy thirst
Quenches... giving me more thirst
I love this dirt on my mind
I love it very first!
Love me, if you can!
A very original love poem sad thru...a dare of love with no guarentees....hope its not you Ali keep on writing enjoyed regards uavaniceday
a very great poem... strong words playing... ...LOVE ME if you can...is a beautiful example of loving the unlovable...loving with no ifs... UNCONDITIONAL LOVE... ...I got a feeling of sadness but I'm also amused reading this piece... great thoughts...ideas on love is really great. 10+++++i like this
wonderful, Love me if u can, a challenge, a plea, wonderful, simply wonderful :)
are you challenging me? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? hehe. kidding! nice and EVIL work! love it. two thumb up!
A very powerful poem. It asks someone to offer love....almost a dare. Very often we harvest the greatest metaphysical riches when we defy first impulses...and take up the dare. A great poem. A 10.
The contrast art is what you showed in the poem, I mean look at your poem hate me if you can This is a different dimension of it, i loved it Dear you tell the ugly things that you think you have But who is in the world has most perfect life...here and now So its not hard to love if we understand and accept Its not hard to love when we know that we ourselves also has flaw At least you tell the truth and warn, that actually sweet for a real friendship Honest, people tend to hate but the easiest is to love if they know For sure we all here can love you with no problem :) Nice poem Ali
We live in dirt and die in dirt. That is the reality. Love me the way I am. Nicely said. Thank you.
No if, no but...a true lover's job is only love da way things are. nice poem.....
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Very nice poem with hard words, I felt little sadness in it but I really liked it.Thank u for sharing dear friend. Best wishes