Up to the skies
From these lands
The world I find
Through my eyes
Can I pack
All in my hands!
If I were blind
I would wish...
How much black!
Limit of wish varies according to our approach, the thought nicely presented in a wonderful short poem.
When we see much, there will be the desire in us to grab more....... If we are blind, the desire in us will be limited...... Happy is the one content with what he has! A poem that communicates a lot! A 10
A beautiful poem reflecting in different angles. If sky is the limit for our wish, then I just wonder where would be. Our wish should be limited. Loved reading it.
such short lines with great truths! Loved enjoying! thanks for sharing friend.10+++
The hope and the wish. Perhaps their unity represents the demise of boundaries, and frees the spirit. This is terrific work, Ali.
An insightful train of thought nicely brought forth from the heart with conviction. A beautiful poem indeed. Thanks for sharing Ali.
Thoughts have no limits, and so are the wishes, no harm in wishing something that is apparently impossible. Nothing is impossible in dreams. A nice thought provoking poem.
We may see many beautiful things.....but we cannot hold everything that we wish to possess! We have to set a limit for our wishes, so that we will not be disappointed! Wisely put!
Yes! Yes, yes, yes! ! ! I like what you said and how you said it.This shows a master poet at the wheel, hands steadying the poem. Well done, my friend!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A profound philosophical write. It's short but contains a lot. Enjoyed reading v much.10