It was a silky-flawless dusk
And He was standing
Forlorn and dejected
In the middle of a busy street
Skins around him
Purring his sensitive parts
With stinking cheap perfumes
Itchy nose running like a stray dog
Barking for a little cuddle
Sniffing for some pure flesh
Looking for a blue shelter
“Hey, you all heartless men and women
Of a disputed land
I ask you to leave him alone
And please go to your homes
He has come to my territory
And I own him now”
The Queen shouted with wrath
In her eloquent voice
She was clad in a white satin ball gown
Holding a holy book in her right hand
And caressing his hair, mouth and neck
With the slender fingers of her left hand
He was all human again
With just one divine touch
He became
A handsome mortal
A wise oracle
And a passionate lover
He kissed her sizzling lower lip
And bit it tenderly
It was an ocean of forbidden desires
Running through the hot-flushing veins
Of his goddess queen
Who just was a naive beauty
In the gentle arms of his handsome lover
Craving for his wild berry lips
Pining for his artistic fingers
Looking in his ocean eyes
And
Pleading to write a Love Poem
On her untouched-fiery bosom
He kissed each millimeter
Of her silky-white skin
With his passionate-thirsty lips
Licked her sweaty-alluring body
Inch by inch
With his insatiate desires
They were locked up, fixed
And protected
Never to get severed again
And the password key sent
To God’s address
Oct 31,2008
Very original imagery. You have a way with words. Ten from me. Kind regards, Sandra
KAMRAN, THIS IS BEAUTIFUL. TRULY MOVING AND EASILY SHARED AND EXPERIENCED BY THE READER. YOU ARE A TRULY ROMANTIC MAN. THANK YOU. HAVE YOU READ SULAIMAN MOHD YOSUF'S WORKS? ANOTHER POWERFUL, EXPRESSIVELY DESCRIPTIVE MALE. YOUR NEW FAN, CAROL
im speechless, this is truely words from a romantic. i melted. beautiful work. and thank you for your words of encouragement on my poems. take care, -kathryn Thurman
Sensuous and insightful...beautiful narration... from start to end...good write...10
A fine artwork indeed! words verses weightful Soooooothing! 10+++++++
The story lines and the vividness of this lovely piece have had me stumbles for a moment, gasping for air of ' bedridden conditioning' specially casted for two Godlike lovers! Im lost in the world of your surreal fantasies.I luv vit! Your bro, Sulaiman Mohd Yusof
Wow, I thought I am grown up, why I still do like so much beautiful fairy tales like this one. Well penned, bravo!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Very romantic Kamran. Really so good. Passionate poem. Though I have not written many roamantics; one tthat gave me some satisfaction was RENDEZVOUS. But I see youngsters like u, Seema Arella, Reshma Ramesh writing excellent romantics........Keep it up.........10