Love, Poetic Style Poem by Sandra Feldman

Love, Poetic Style

Rating: 4.8


Emotionally yours,
And forever wanting
The utopic presence
Of your smile.
Stay a while,
Hold my hand,
Let our souls
Blend together,
Poetic style.

Tuesday, January 10, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: love,poetry
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Khairul Ahsan 25 January 2017

@Sandra, Your poem: Love, Poetic Style evoked feelings of love in me and made me feel so good! Perhaps I am not able to express my feelings as clearly as Susan Williams did in her comment on your poem. I loved her comment too. It's always a pleasure to read your romantic poems which make the readers see the beauty of being romantic and feel romantic themselves.

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Eugene Levich 18 January 2017

Sandracita hasn't lost her touch!

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Susan Williams 11 January 2017

Sigh..... you bring big screen romance to life in this poem. I feel like a woman full of yearning, full of passion triggered by a smile, by a hand reaching out and folding my hand inside his, by sitting beside me on the couch and we lean toward each other... melting into each other's body and soul... Purrrrrr! Look what you can do with a few well-chosen words, Sandra! ! I was not feeling the teeniest bit romantic when I sat down to read this..... but that's what a good writer does.... take a reader and change her/his mood with a word or two! 10++++++++++++++

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Muhammad Ali 11 January 2017

love is beautiful at this point of wish, and this poem too. and afterwards...

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