I have spelled out love's abracadabra
To take the gem from head of a cobra
I am playing the pipe to make her dance
I am dancing with her in wild romance
I have broken her fang to tame her now
She has become as good as a pet cow
I have touched her head with my magic wand
In order to make real my sweet dreamland
Thus I have turned her into a woman
Now she has become my favorite fan
This is short and sweet. I love the rhythm. Pls keep writting.
So original in a spellbinding rhythm and imagery, loved it! !
Wow! How well on the wings of imagination! I wish you get your love like a Love.
It is a good piece of poem. surprised coz abracadabra is a Jewish religious charm to heal Malaria as mentioned in encyclopedias !
Talk of creative writing this one really good the imagery of the lover(magician) the deadly snake pet being tamed. The persona must be very loving.
Really a wonderful poetry, it really unique you know..i am sorry for late respond as i told you before, i am not much reading lately...blurry eyes, headache, mind wandering, and time less in hand, but i managed to get some read of your poem..i know you always doing a very nice poem like always..like this one_Soul
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A great combination of thought and poetic skill.