Love is like a seesaw that goes up and down
Just like the ferris wheel it goes around and around
Sometimes you maybe happy and at times maybe sad
You played the game of love and lost everything you had
Love can be unsteady and sometimes topsy-turvy
Can be bold and beautiful and also kind of nervy
Here today and gone tomorrow a never ending battle
Will either make or break you until you start to rattle
Love can either break your heart or tear it all asunder
Thrown out and cast aside then left outside for plunder
A seesaw kind of love you see can also be unsteady
Never go for a ride on love unless you're good and ready
Love can make you a loser and may sometimes let you win
Whatever it takes to keep it try playing again and again
When you have had enough tell the love seesaw goodbye
Give your self sometime to recover and give it another try
Copyright 2013
Love is really like seesaw. One part is seen, and the other unseen. A nice comparison! The rhythm of the poem is fabulous!
love can be like a seesaw and if you want to play it safe, just sit in the middle and you won't fall on your face. excellent write!
The reasons stated here are suffice to prove, Loved and lost is better than not to be love at all.
In this fabulous poem of Love Seesaw you have examined all aspects of love in all conditions which is highly captivating!
Viva l'amour Patricia. Love can bite so deeply that the world stops. Love can be so serene that the world is bliss. But Oh! When love has had it's day it's great to feel that freedom to set off on the chase again. Love it. Well written.
I am so happy you had pointed this particular poem out to me, because I love it! It is so true, and explains this emotion and game perfectly! And I do agree, it reminds me of more than a few of my past written poems....from the Game....to 'moonlight memories'....saying we both have a similar view of this powerful emotion! Thank you for sharing your take on it all!
Creativity, truthfulness soothing heart and mind felt as if travelling through the sea...deep blue lovely 10
I believe I commented on this poem but infortunately deleted. I dont remember what I wrote, but for sure this an exquisite poem! Bravo!
I read this, look down and up my chin with feel so good, they write that you tell all in nice way and true too..creative i would say is a based structure for this poem_SOul
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
So beautifully written.... but so so so difficult me to understand.... please provide glossary...