Love Story - 1978 Poem by louis rams

Love Story - 1978

Rating: 5.0


she pleaded and begged him to stay
but he turned and walked away
not really caring about what she felt
he wanted to travel and find himself.

he travelled throughout all the southwest
finding odd jobs and doing his best.
women he found plenty of
but never one that he could love.

finally realizing that the girl he had left
was the one that suited him best.
he packed his clothes and got into his car.
'but ' he did'nt have to travel very far.

for she was only a mile away
she had followed him every day.

and as their eyes met, they both knew
that at last his search was through.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Shashendra Amalshan 03 September 2009

Hey this is very nice indeed...... Lovely to read.. very romantic affair isn't it? ? ? / When it comes to real life it is not like this though, cause most times people marry woman, just for the sake of marrying some one... most times they end up marrying the person that they didn't lv this is very nice and not many have the luxury of fall in lv with the person that is so close to them.. nice lv shan

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~ Jon London ~ 07 September 2009

The romance of love bounces through this louis....a very honest and heart written piece...a wonderful, and natural feeling...you get from this...a love that was meant to be...but was it ever seen...10

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 28 June 2010

Sweet ending…quest is over and quite flows Don like before without eddied in mind… thanks sharing… Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10 .

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Romeo Della Valle 13 October 2009

A very compelling love poem, great story to tell the whole world, well penned, also, you got my vote,10+, Love and Peace, Romeo

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Rachel Butler 10 October 2009

And as their eyes met, they both knew Rachel Ann Butler

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Almedia Knight-Oliver 29 September 2009

A beautiful love story of 'they lived happily ever after' a 10

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 12 September 2009

and as their eyes met, they both knew that at last his search was through..love at first and last sight... very rarely it happens but yes if true love and dediationis there. nothing canstop them from unting....lovely poem to beread and rearead........10 read mine mary to marry.....anywhere

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