Love You, Deadly Poem by ojok phillips awany

Love You, Deadly

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LOVE YOU, DEADLY
My love,
If you wish to kiss me,
Keep it simple stupid.
I don’t want my heart exploded with joy
Your love is magical
Fresh like a rose flower,
But tarnish like an old age diamond

If you wish to hug me,
Please keep aloof.
It sinks deep my heart,
Like a dry dropp of sulphuric acid
It blend my heart with happiness
But leave me with stream of tears

If you wish to squeeze me,
Please touch me not,
Am allergic to soft sophiscated touches
they raise my temper and make me want to slaughter a woman
i don’t wish you die,
But your love flows inside me like the great Nile,
It flood my heart like the great Tennessee valley

My love,
If you wish to leave me,
Please provide for me a casket,
Decorate my graveyard,
Then leave in peace
But remember my love for you
I love you, deadly

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

you are great at figurative writing, devise means of integrating rhymes in your meters it can be in order of ABABCB, ABBA, etc any arrangement of rhyme for a poem sounds like a soothing flute with rhyme. write till cows come home, we will soon inherit this country and they will know we once existed

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