Sulaiman Mohd Yusof

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*** On Valentine's Day *** - Poem by Sulaiman Mohd Yusof

Hi sweetie pie so divine
Your beauty is so refined
The day has come to define
You’re my lucrative Valentine

The roses for you are not for any woman
It’s the roses grown from Eden
Our ties are not sudden
We’re closer to heaven


Looking at my bedroom’s wall
I see your ever sweet face there
I smile and take a fall
Your love for me to spare


A walking distance, I walk
To the Gifts’ Shop, I step in
I sigh and take a knock
My head goes gaga, to find the hint


What’s best for you is yet to come
It could be a small token, of no meaning
To tell Mom about you would be no harm
Dad would say “it’s your picking”


Sometimes I wonder, what’s made me love you
I guess your kind heart and understanding
The groove in you and your thick lips too
But most of all, your big blue eyes that conquering


Remember the first time I stared at you?
You were in the lobby ushering me
The next day, we were in bed, encaged, like a zoo
Making love till dawn, like crazy


Dear, on this auspicious date we lay
We conjoin our hearts, souls and love
I propose to you on this Valentine’s Day
May our marriage get the blessing from above




PS: I was inspired by the song ' Try Me ' by the group 'UFO'. The impact of the song has made this poem possible! ! !


Comments about *** On Valentine's Day *** by Sulaiman Mohd Yusof

  • Ken E Hall (2/19/2009 4:36:00 AM)

    Luvli poem for valentines day to be with the one you love worth all the tea in china
    ++10++
    regards
    uavaniceone (Report) Reply

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  • Winnie Angel (2/18/2009 10:09:00 PM)

    hey nice write....trully loving and blessing a lifetime valentine! ! ! .. (Report) Reply

  • Cherry Sha (2/13/2009 9:38:00 AM)

    beautiful Love story...that would possible turn into marriage (Report) Reply

  • Amal Hassan (2/13/2009 4:17:00 AM)

    A really lovely poem. Simple but yet so pure. (Report) Reply

  • Tyrone Wingfield (2/12/2009 6:21:00 PM)

    I have one word, AMAZING. This is exactly what I look for in a poem Keep up the great work (Report) Reply

  • June30 Tara (2/12/2009 6:21:00 AM)

    Wow, loved it!
    Beautifully crafted
    Romance at its best (Report) Reply

  • Stephanie Byrne Byrne (2/11/2009 11:04:00 AM)

    Very heart warming and your Valentine is a lucky lady :) (Report) Reply

  • Seema Chowdhury (2/11/2009 7:56:00 AM)

    such aa lovely poem. thanks for sharing your beautiful thoughts with us. (Report) Reply

  • Meer Mushfique Mahmood (2/11/2009 6:58:00 AM)

    Reflection of a fair mind. (Report) Reply

  • Kuji Soliman (2/11/2009 2:48:00 AM)

    confident, yet lost in your sweethearts eyes!
    its a verry nice peice! !
    really and i dont lie!
    it is also sooooo romantic!
    keep on writting more! (Report) Reply

  • Sulaiman Mohd Yusof (2/11/2009 1:02:00 AM)

    The extract from Samouna's comment:

    From: OuSs@Ma Samouna (Annaba Algeria; Male; 17)
    To: Sulaiman Mohd Yusof
    Date Time: 2/9/2009 11: 36: 00 AM (GMT -6: 00)


    Subject: Hi, there! ! !


    hOw are you, my sweet wonderful brOther? ? ! !

    i have just red some of your poems.
    they are really good..



    From east to west Sulumain Med Yusof is the Best*

    From all the world; Sulmain is the Lord * (Report) Reply

  • Sulaiman Mohd Yusof (2/11/2009 12:30:00 AM)

    The extract from Rage Alley's comment:

    From: Rage Allay (Philippines ;)
    To: Sulaiman Mohd Yusof
    Date Time: 2/10/2009 5: 28: 00 AM (GMT -6: 00)


    Subject: Thanks!


    Dear Sulaiman Mohd Yusof,

    I really appreciated your comment. Thanks!

    I enjoyed reading your Valentine poem. You were very candid, confident, and carefree. Yet, the style, the rythm, and the flow were intact. Thanks again for sharing.

    Best of health,

    Rage (Report) Reply

  • Shaffras Mahamoor (2/11/2009 12:26:00 AM)

    ur flow of poetic energy is a universal gift. we r lucky to b here to share those flowless feelings. (Report) Reply

  • Sulaiman Mohd Yusof (2/10/2009 10:46:00 PM)

    The extract from Mary Spain's comment:

    From: Mary Spain (United Kingdom ;)
    To: Sulaiman Mohd Yusof
    Date Time: 2/10/2009 1: 35: 00 PM (GMT -6: 00)


    Subject: Re: valentine


    Sulaiman - have you sent this fine poem to UFO? I'm sure they'd love to know that they'd been your inspiration.
    Mary (Report) Reply

  • Mohammed Al-balushi (2/10/2009 11:09:00 AM)

    lovely valentine to u, i really enjoye reading it, thank u to sharing with us (Report) Reply

  • Sulaiman Mohd Yusof (2/10/2009 8:50:00 AM)

    The extract from Francis Duggan's comment:

    From: Francis Duggan (Australia ;)
    To: Sulaiman Mohd Yusof
    Date Time: 2/9/2009 4: 00: 00 PM (GMT -6: 00)


    Subject: Re: valentine


    Hello Sulaiman

    Another 10 poem from you this one you just keep turning them out, good on you Sulaiman (Report) Reply

  • Sulaiman Mohd Yusof (2/10/2009 8:48:00 AM)

    The extract from Shannon Newsom's comment:

    From: Shannon Newsom (... United States; Female; 40)
    To: Sulaiman Mohd Yusof
    Date Time: 2/9/2009 4: 04: 00 PM (GMT -6: 00)


    Subject: Re: valentine


    What a beautiful poem, thank you for sharing! (Report) Reply

  • Rajaram Ramachandran (2/10/2009 7:49:00 AM)

    A well composed Valentine day's poem (Report) Reply

  • Abdul Karim (2/10/2009 6:04:00 AM)

    Awesome writing, it's a beauty that is defined with great exuberance and feeling which what we most we should write, feelng with great tender heart, compassionate, infinite and probably great altruism. (Report) Reply

  • Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar (2/10/2009 12:12:00 AM)

    A stimulating and arousing piece. shan (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, February 8, 2009

Poem Edited: Monday, February 9, 2009


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