Loving Leaving And Learning Poem by LaRon Green Sr.
Loving Leaving And Learning
In my thoughts, is a feeling of love
Its passion is flowing, my heart is dove
Days of you being with me
Is flying with the wind
To realize, that our days are coming to an end
Sitting here thinking, about our times
What a day to know, that you was a dime
I dont know what went wrong
But I knew my love, was so strong
I need not to remember, all that went astray
From those lesson, I grew gray
Our time was well spent under thoughts
It taught me things, that cant be brought
I no longer need to stay
Asking for your love after today
I no longer have feelings your way
Its something I care not to say
I am sorry If i cause any confusion
But I will not go on in a transfusion
What occur is no tragedy
But a touch of reality
You must be remember
As we enter back in society
My life is real to me
To waste on a causality
Now I will look for love and commitment within
So as I exit and enter into a life of grace
I thank God I had the courage to leave your place
The geometry of a poem is something to learn about in the verses and its rhythms.A well-framed and well-balanced poem
Oh this one is really moving, i feel so great watching the lines dwell from your honest and soft heart, it really a good poem LaRon Green Sr! the title just perfect to belt what it tell inside...Keep it up and let your pen keep on writing okay! _Unwritten Soul
Yes you have already entered into the life of grace.Undoubtedly, you have the good poetic ability.God is always with us.
Now I will look for love and commitment within So as I exit and enter into a life of grace I thank God I had the courage to leave your place May God bless you, nice poem. full marks.
Your poem is good indeed. I have rated it already. Thanks for your message. It proves distance doesn't work.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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A tailot sense of expresion. Special for me at this moment of pain. I really find comfort from this piece. Nice one! Check out my poems too!