Forgive me, I thought somebody cared,
I thought it was you
Or I would surely never dared
Reveal myself through
Who made you guardian of my days,
Master of each step?
The spirit will retaliates,
Becoming suppressed.
I thought it was you,
Wearing an angelical smile
And with sparkling eyes
Bewitching me with its magic.
As time slowly passed.
The truth was clearly revealed
When I saw the fake lover
Hiding behind the mask.
I thought it was you,
The one permanently fixed
In my heart and mind
And also in my dreams.
Disappointed now I am
But with faith and hope
I will eventually survive
And see a brighter light.
One sunny day
While the butterflies dance
And the birds happily sing,
I shall find you my angel,
The woman of my dream
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Wearing an angelical smile And with sparkling eyes Superb write...Well done!
Disappointed now I am But with faith and hope I will eventually survive And see a brighter light. One sunny day While the butterflies dance And the birds happily sing, I shall find you my angel, The woman of my dream i love that part i relate 100% very well written poem
Well written poem you summarized my last relationship i love the meaning and i love the honesty Great poem sir
This poem relates so much to my feelings... pulls us into the deceitfulness of a betraying lover :) The flow was pleasant, very soothing as if its painted on canvas :) Rated it 10+++... thanks honorable poet... please keep writing and keep sharing :)
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
An ageless poem, reminiscent of Pablo Neruda with the way love is combined with deeper meaning and almost sorrowful and longing thought. Very good. sorry I can't comment on them all, haha. -Ms. Queenie