Mihaela Pirjol


'Madness' (Senryu)


seclusion null Self
divine voices calls Man—God
reality fades

Submitted: Tuesday, July 29, 2014
Edited: Thursday, December 11, 2014

Topic of this poem: senryu


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Comments about this poem ('Madness' (Senryu) by Mihaela Pirjol )

  • Silver Star - 7,915 Points Daniel Brick (9/10/2014 6:48:00 AM)

    I read all of the comments on this poem. Only one person admitted to being confused by it. I'll step forward as the second to be confused. It's called MADNESS - is the madness that of a human being who considers himself equal to God, a god himself? ? And the first line - I can't follow it grammatically. Seclusion none Self. There's ambiguity in self spelled with a capital S, because it refers to levels of being in Buddhism and Hinduism, but is that happening here? (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 7,536 Points Geetha Jayakumar (8/21/2014 5:56:00 AM)

    Quiet Interesting. Short and meaningful. I just loved it. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 374 Points Ency Bearis (8/15/2014 5:39:00 AM)

    I like the brevity remarkable (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 408 Points Anthony Burkett (8/11/2014 11:17:00 AM)

    Ooooooo! Lovely! I do so much enjoy your poetry... haiku is my favorite! Very difficult, but well worth the effort when successfully accomplished... as you my dear have so eloquently done! Touché to you and your pen! (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 9,695 Points Heather Wilkins (8/10/2014 8:38:00 PM)

    short deep and well written I enjoyed the read (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 353 Points Sina Farajzadeh (7/31/2014 8:29:00 AM)

    Hi. I read your work. It is hard to interpret it. Well, it is short and deep I guess. Reallity fades. I like it when you call human a Man-God and how you yourself are the divine voice. Good Luck (Report) Reply

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